Scene from The Songbird
This transition tho.
"Master." Millicent sensed
Darkness' presence.
"Hello, my pet, my little ray
of pitch black, my darling." his voice was a smooth as honey, low and
sweet, but Millicent hated the way that he drew out 'darling' whenever he
called her thus. He flashed a pointy grin. "I'm sure you know why I'm
here, you're smart like that, of course."
"No. This time you seem to have
come needlessly and without point or purpose. So tell me, to what do I owe the
honor of your visit."
"Why, is it not like me to show
up for the pleasure of your company?" He glided closer, and Millicent
resisted the urge to pull her legs up to her chest in a defensive position. She
forced a small laugh out of her dry throat.
"Me? You came to see me for the
fun of it? Why?" She batted her eyelashes, flirting a bit, all the while
forcing herself to keep a pleasing look on her face. "Actually, I had
hoped that you would stop by."
"And why is that?"
Darkness sidled up next to her.
"Oh it's silly really. Anyways,
why did you come?" Millicent forced herself to give his shoulder a playful
push.
"Really, now. My darling,"
he drew it out again, she could see him rolling the word around in his mind
like a piece of chocolate, "what is it? You know how much I," he
licked his thin, shriveled lips, "adore to hear you ask me for
something." He grinned his pointy grin again.
Millicent giggled. Mostly from
nerves, but if it helped her cause, she would do anything it took.
"Come now, don't be coy with
me." Darkness inched closer. "You know how I do love you when you are
frank with me instead."
"You really want to know?"
She pulled her eyebrows together and tilted her head to the side daintily.
"My little Shadow, of course I
do."
"Well, it’s simple really, a
little transfer, if you will." She waved her hand in the air, giggling
again. Darkness caught it, and held it up, examining her fingers.
"Go on."
"Again, you will think it's
silly."
"Only if you keep stalling like
that. I know your heart" he turned her hand over, "it's as black as
mine, or it will be when I finish with you. You want something, and you are
afraid to ask me for it. But I've already told you, and now I'm commanding
you" he gritted his teeth and pulled her out of her throne and to her feet,
"tell me what you want!"
"I wish to return to my land
early. Wait!" Millicent cowered at Darkness' feet. "I will add the
remaining time from this restraint to my next one. Please." She gazed up
at him. "Let me see my family before the trouble comes. Before you take
over. I want to see them happy one last time."
Darkness laughed. It was a laugh
that was purely evil. Millicent shut her eyes and put her hands over her ears.
He pulled her to her feet again and yanked her hands away from her ears.
"You wish to see them happy, do
you?" he hissed into her ear. "You'll see them alright!"
"You will let me go?"
Disbelief flooded across her face. "Early, even?"
"Of course. You are my
accomplice, my helper, my worshiper." He rattled on. "Yes,
yes. You will go, but only on one condition." He stopped abruptly and
stared deeply into her eyes.
"Anything!" She eagerly
promised. She would see how beautiful her niece had become! Ever since Darkness
had filled her curtain, she was without link to her home.
Darkness smiled. This was what he
had spent years badgering and waiting for her to agree to. And to think, all it
took was a small measure of leverage.
"You will let me finish what I
began?"
"Yes, yes. I told you, anything
to see my family again!" She confirmed, not quite thinking of all that
could come from her agreement.
"Let me have your remaining
memories in exchange for the power to visit all the worlds." He demanded.
Millicent paused for a moment. Then
nodded her head. "They are yours, only let me have my family back."
He smiled again, and placed his
hands around her head. Gone. He left only his name inside of her mind.
Duath-ogol.
She fell to the ground in a heap,
dark hair flung over her face in tangles. He chuckled. She would see her family
as promised, of course. But she would never know it was them. He owned her now,
both body and soul. For, when one parts with all one’s memories, they lose
themselves and are at the mercy and command of whosoever claims them. He chuckled
again, watching her change, and waited for her to wake up again. New and ready
to do his will.
Darkness. That was all she felt. And
burning. She could not shake the throbbing, boiled heat in her chest. Whatever
it was, she had nothing to compare it to, only that it was painful. She slowly
forced her eyes open. Her hands were black and scaly, her throat was dry and
raw, and she was unbearably cold and hot at the same time.
From the throne, he watched his
creation come back to life. Her hair hardened into long spikes, her cloak
morphed into a pair of hideous wings, and her skin cracked into dull, black scales.
Her face, he left, for he found it pleasing to the eye. He allowed her to keep
the use of her hands like she had before, but he tipped each delicate finger
with a sharp claw. And her eyes. He could not bear to leave them in their
original state. He changed them from blue to completely black, even the whites.
And where her pupils used to be, he left burning coals. He watched her slowly
rise to her hands and knees.
She
tried to stand, but fell again. Or was it a second time? She didn’t know. Her
vision tinted red as she rose up again. A movement invaded her peripheral
vision and she turned to face it, almost stumbling over her feet, which he had
made bigger to support the added weight of her wings.
“Who
are you?” her voice rasped.
“Your
master. Your friend, if you will do as I say.” His voice was smooth and as soft as velvet.
“Oh
yes. Duath, is it?”
“Yes.”
His eyes glittered.
“Where
am I?” She didn’t sound frightened, for she was not. She merely asked out of
curiosity.
“Home.”
Was the simple reply.
“Why
are you here?”
“To
give you your instructions.”
“As
you wish, Master.” She bowed her head, waiting to receive her orders.
“You
will go to Doriar, not to worry I will show you the way, and you will rule the
people there as I command.”
“And
how would that be?” She looked up expectantly.
“With
an iron fist. If they do not follow your commands, you will make them bend to your
wishes. You will be their Queen. I give you,” he held out his hand, “mind-reading.
Do with it as you will. Amarth.” He flashed his pointed teeth.
A
flickering of memory stirred in the back of her mind. Then she knew what he
wished her to do. A smile spread across her face.
“With
pleasure.” She hissed.
OH THIS IS SOOOO GOOD!
ReplyDeleteYou totally gave me some feels in just this section! WHEN CAN I READ MORE?!
Conquer the writing!
THANK YOU! Not to worry, I'll be posting a bunch of snippets at the end of the month.
DeleteHello I'm Marrok and I have to say that scene is very nicely done
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